This is what happens to me always. I want to write so many things but I get tired. I know what I’m thinking but I don’t know how to write it. So my mom said to write little bits down. Here are some of my little bits.
1. Watching tv makes me tired. This is one big reason I don’t like to watch tv. At school sometimes my teacher Miss Carissa puts on a dvd and all I want to do is go sit at a table and do my work and not watch the tv. But that would be not nice.
There are things on tv that you don’t know if they’re true. Like if you look for a little while, you will see something about the women on tv. They are all slim and wear lots of make up. That’s not real life. And if something is happening in a show it’s not even real. People are pretending to be real people. It’s a big fake out. I like to watch documentrys. They are real. Most of the time.
Hi, Sophia,
The note taking approach, or little bits as you call it, is a great way to keep a record of your ideas so when you want to write something larger, you have material to work with. You’re also right about women on TV. TV women also seem to get very excited about toilet bowl cleaner and cooking vegetables with heart-clogging cheese on them.
Thank you, Mr. Jimmy. I don’t watch much tv. So I have not seen those women yet. Cheese is one of my favorite things. I like parmijano rejianno and goat cheese and sometimes cheese sticks. My mom tells me not to eat too much. I get the congestion when I do. Vegetable are the things I’m trying to like more. I like jicama and broccoli and kale and onions and cucumbers and my mom’s salad dressing with shaluts and vinegr. and I love grandma’s indian vegetables. palak paneer that’s got cheese too. but it’s different kind of cheese.
TV always makes me tired too. I always wake up on the couch wondering why I didn’t just go to bed.